Mr. Jingle 14

Clearly, this little guy is frustrated that he can’t find this jingling thing! As he gets more frustrated, so does the text get more frustrating! I’ve rewritten this page and the next 3 or 4 many many ways, and still don’t feel settled yet. For now, we’ll see how the next few pages go! His frustration doesn’t seem to follow any logical sequence. But what’s logical about sleeping in a tree anyway! We’ll just see what happens! ( the text as it is now, is below the picture.)

It’s none of THESE treasures!
Oh, chagrin! chagrin!
My head’s shaking “no”
Propped up on my chin…

Jingle 15

What makes this jingle
Ring so clear?
There must be something!
It must be here!




  1. Will said,

    March 7, 2013 at 10:00 pm

    Mom! Your book is so wonderful!! Really interesting. I can’t wait to see what will be on the next page…:) Keep it coming!

  2. afgordon said,

    March 7, 2013 at 10:11 pm

    Thanks, Will! I’m interested to see what happens next, too! Now that the text keeps changing! Books are so much more dynamic in the writing stage than I ever realized! Hope you’re having a great week!

  3. Bruce Mulkey said,

    March 8, 2013 at 8:20 am

    Intriguing. I’ve got to catch up with this little guy!

  4. Bruce Mulkey said,

    March 8, 2013 at 8:21 am

    Intriguing! I can’t wait to catch up on the adventures of this little guy.

  5. afgordon said,

    March 8, 2013 at 10:49 pm

    Thanks, Bruce. I love reading about your ‘real’ adventures with your ‘sweet little gal’!

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