Inside My Great Walls, Page 4

Finally I have a Page 4 illustrated! and changes made to the text! I’m still wanting to add something next to the little guy’s cocoon that is a hopeful indication of what is to come after his quarantine here imagined as his cocoon. The caterpillar is transforming into a butterfly and will freely fly off to new heights and happenings after being in a cocoon. The little guy? What would feel like freedom and adventure for him? I’m thinking I could put a few hints like him sitting on a bicycle (maybe only showing the seat with him sitting and the back wheel.)? And perhaps I could put one of his favorite capes on his back (superhero?) or a pirate hat on his head? Any suggestions?

Inside My Great Walls, Page 4!
Inside My Great Walls, written by Ann Gordon, read by John Gordon


  1. Allison said,

    March 28, 2020 at 9:09 pm

    This is great! Love the reading….
    How ’bout a kite? (It feels like flying…)

  2. Charles R Knighton said,

    March 28, 2020 at 9:22 pm

    maybe imaginary friend….named Buzz with or without stuffed or plastic animal

    I like your story

  3. Liz McDonough said,

    March 28, 2020 at 9:31 pm

    Flying a kite ? is what I thought also

  4. Ann Gordon said,

    March 29, 2020 at 7:42 am

    Thank you ALL for your great suggestions!
    Allison and Liz your great minds think loftily together
    I hadn’t thought of a kite! What a great idea! I’ll add it to my ponderings!

    And Charlie! Of course Buzz hadn’t entered my mind! Did you have an imaginary friend named Buzz? Sounds worthy of a whole book to me! I’ll add it to my list as well! hmmm… and Buzz’s favorite toy!
    Thanks so much for taking the time to share your ideas with me! Stay safe and healthy in all your cocoons!

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